Changes in my literacy narrative

    On my literacy narrative I still have several changes to do. I need a lot of work on my punctuation, mostly with commas. And some of my sentences are way too long. I am also going to try broadening my vocabulary and try to use different words besides real, very and a lot, just to make it not so boring. I'm also going to try and work on tying my paper all together. It is a little bit scattered, so the paragraph change doesn't really flow. Hopefully that will make it better!